Friday 1 October 2010

..every breath i will lend.. :) :(

if you were made of fire 🔥 
and I were made of paper
I would still kiss you anyways 


if your beginning shall need my end..
for you every breath i will lend..
if your happiness shall need me in sorrow...
every pain in the world i will happily borrow..
if your life shall need me perished...
i shall forget every dream i cherished....
if i do not see happiness in your eyes..
i ll cry tears even while i am sitting in paradise...
if in your heart a place i cannot win..
even a place in heaven is a bin ...
if in your heart a flower i cannot nurse..
all the happiness of the world for me..is a curse...
if i am painted a castaway to an isolated lagoon..
with you besides me..i ll consider it a boon...
if  people around have my name demonised...
i wouldn't bother if i only have ' you '  realized...
if something that keeps me happy makes your eyes moisten..
even the sweetest nectar would taste like poison...
if only my ' death ' shall forever open the gates to your heart...
i would merrily embrace it and to the other world i shall depart...
if then and only my ' name  ' in your heart you will forever carve...
i will ' smile ' even as i lay sleeping in my grave... 
if even then my love puts you in pain..
i would rise up from my slumber  to have it slain.. :( :(

19 comments:

  1. wat a rhyming,,,
    its perfectly o'sm.....:)
    get goin....

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  2. ..thanks doc...
    ..thanks for dropping by...

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  3. hi, did you sketch this yourself? it's nice!

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  4. ...like spring sets in , flowers starts bloomin..all the romanticism..arises..4m the poet..n on all a sudden..it soothes awy..all..d..miserliness bound to us..

    ..nice poem..

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  5. @Drchaitra..
    ...thanks for droppin by...

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  6. @delhida ei..
    ...amazing lines...poetry fr sure brings us out of of our everyday miseries...
    ..it shows us a way to escape frm d realism dat sorrounds us...though only fr sumtime..hehehe..
    ..thanks fr ur comment.. :) ;)

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  7. appreciations for nice writeup. You kept the rhyme going. Good.

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  9. @deepika..
    ..thanks fr dropping by..
    ..am glad u liked d poem...

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  10. @vishal..
    ...yah..had to maintain d rhyme till d very end..
    ..thanks fr d encouraging comment.. :)

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  11. very romantic ,.... n u lucky boy...guess what ?????????

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  12. ..thank u so much Valli..
    ..i sure wud try to come up wid more.. :)

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  13. Accidental Love

    Love is hard to understand,
    It is rarely, ever truly planned.
    You may think its strictly mental,
    But its actually, fairly gentle.

    If you truly pay attention,
    It may seem like a great invention.
    With everyone that gives advice,
    They always say, there’s a heavy price.

    But I just follow, what’s inside,
    Since our hearts, did collide.
    Once the mess is completely cleared,
    There’s nothing else to be feared.

    by pretty love poems

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  14. @pretty love poems..

    ..beautiful lines...

    ..but i just follow whats inside..
    ..since our hearts did collide..
    ..once d mess is completely cleared..
    ..ders nothing else to b feared...

    ..thanks fr dropping by... :) ;)

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  15. Wonderful words and I loved the sketch, too...made by you?

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  16. Breath breath no matter what i am sure your lending will not go for vain...!!! Remember show must go on and it will as long as you breath.. Amazing words with rhymes...

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