Monday 6 February 2012

my dear woman :) ;)

reading her lips is ecstasy  
for she is
but a mug of romance
beyond this faceless crowd
amidst the din of people
lies the comfort  of my solitude
the reason for my literary curiosity
beyond this wall of endless tyranny
lies the pastures of my freedom
the feather to my wings
and flight to my words
beyond this wail of loneliness
lies the warmth of my companion
i cant resist her vapors
as she fumes and calls me..seeking her company
beyond this face of my innocence
lies the reason for the rage of my poems
for she transforms me into a warrior
arming me with words
laced with bows,arrows,spears n cannons
beyond this macabre dance of lies
lies the honesty of her aroma
for she gives ointment to my wounds
and stalks me with her fumes
beyond this enemy lines
i am surrounded by enemies
and i seek solace in her simmering chest
for she is..my dear  ' woman  '
' my boiling cup of tea '  ;)  :)
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42 comments:

  1. aman6 February 2012 at 11:57

    Amazing .....u r getting better day by day.....awsm buddy .. keep posting....:) i hope u r filling d diary too...:)

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  2. Jyoti Mishra6 February 2012 at 19:43

    just WOW
    imagery u create wid ur words is awesome !!!

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  3. Manisha Bhatia6 February 2012 at 20:19

    Oooolalala...marvellous!

    Ur woman is lucky...;)

    Love
    Mani

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  4. Jerly6 February 2012 at 20:50

    Real good

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  5. Jerly6 February 2012 at 20:54

    u are speaking about tea as ur woman, thats what I understood

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  6. JANU7 February 2012 at 01:16

    Wonderful.

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  7. JANU7 February 2012 at 01:16

    Wonderful.

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  8. desert rose7 February 2012 at 05:21

    your luv for tea is indeed reflected frm ur splendid poem... keep writing n keep havin loads n loads of tea.

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  9. Nas7 February 2012 at 14:00

    This was really very good!
    And powerful too.
    :)

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  10. photos by jan7 February 2012 at 20:08

    I enjoyed this, I love the romance of the cup of tea. So vivid I could almost smell the aroma.

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  11. Rimly8 February 2012 at 00:08

    I loved this Rigzin! What a unique personification of a cup of tea. I mean who would personify a cup of tea with a woman. She sure sounded sizzling!!!!

    Would love your comment on my latest poem

    http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.in/2012/02/dark-desire.html

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  12. Dangerous Linda12 February 2012 at 08:16

    you stir a fiery tempest within me with your words! you had me hooked by reading the poetry within your banner...by the time i finished reading "..my dear woman..:-)" i felt a bit weak in the knees!

    thank you for sharing your beautiful truth as you do!

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  13. Kriti13 February 2012 at 09:53

    Rigzin your words really do come from somewhere within. A place I can't even go to if I were trained. You are a true poet - beautiful!

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  14. Jessica Brant13 February 2012 at 10:25

    Beautifully written love the way you play with words.

    Jessica Brant
    co founder of BlogNostics

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  15. Shreya14 February 2012 at 10:54

    Nice one :)

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  16. Anonymous17 February 2012 at 03:26

    Dear Rigzin,
    Your love speaks through each and every line! A wonderful poem!
    -Portia

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  17. Ankitha18 February 2012 at 09:25

    Wooow.. i like previously also told ur sketches talk volumes ..:) ver well written as well..:)

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  18. Ankitha18 February 2012 at 09:26

    Honesstly speaking i love tea.. big tym addict..:) so loved it evn more..:)

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  19. Farfalla Dreams ~ Lisa Marie Farfalla18 February 2012 at 10:41

    "..beyond dis wall of endless tyranny..
    ..lies d pastures of my freedom..
    ..d feather to my wings.."

    BEAUTIFUL WORDS!!!

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  20. Deepika Vasudeva19 February 2012 at 06:20

    Women in dreams..
    if you want your women to stay an angel.. create a heaven for her..
    done brilliantly!

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  21. Anonymous19 February 2012 at 23:16

    Your poem speaks a lot!!! Your love just marvellously put into words....my heart skipped a beat at the end..:) Well done

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  22. Kriti20 February 2012 at 20:26

    Then move beyond all of it my friend - your place is on the other side : )

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  23. Irene21 February 2012 at 19:39

    Beautiful imagery of a woman compared to a cup of tea! That was really romantic! :-)

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  24. Anonymous24 February 2012 at 07:33

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  25. sulekkha25 February 2012 at 01:27

    I am a tea drinker too so know how you feel :)

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  26. Anonymous26 February 2012 at 23:48

    i've some small garden of herbs at home, i use them for baking foods and as herbal medicines.
    84HLUL3NT3
    vimax vimax
    vimax Vimax
    vimax vimax
    vimax vimax

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  27. photos by jan5 April 2012 at 13:37

    Wow this is absolutely wonderfully romantic, I love it...:)

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  28. Sri Valli23 April 2012 at 05:55

    Wow!...This is amazing and so touching...Beautifully penned Rigzin :)

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  29. Anonymous1 May 2012 at 00:04

    What an amazing peice of writing..Kudos...:)

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  30. Manisha Bhatia4 May 2012 at 01:16

    http://mani-wheniwaslostinme.blogspot.in/2012/05/sunshine-award.html

    Award for you rigzz!! :)

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  31. Tameka12 May 2012 at 07:24

    Fiery, passionate and playful. You manipulate words beautifully! :-)

    http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2012/05/shades-of-green-and-gray-embracing-challenges-to-become-a-better-artist.html

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  32. Fhermission26 May 2012 at 03:34

    It was my first to actually have a sit down with your poetry, been seeing it running around...and hey! I missed a lot. Got to catch up. You're pure talent...
    Amazing.
    Keep it up.

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  33. Tanya Sehgal21 September 2012 at 10:56

    Simply wonderful. Solitude & literary curiosity. You are a terrific poet :) Loved visiting your blog :)

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  34. Kriti5 March 2013 at 06:39

    Sizzling hot Rigzin! Your woman truly is lucky to have you and your words in her life : ))

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  35. Surbhi Mishra25 July 2013 at 00:39

    you are extremely awsum rogzin...wow is wat i can onlt say.

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  36. Sayantini20 October 2014 at 21:31

    Each word exclaims the emotion behind it while the pictures become evidently visible in the canvas. Lovely creation. Well done buddy :)

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  39. Noryang4 June 2015 at 23:28

    Beautiful thoughts flowed with perfect words

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  40. usha27 October 2015 at 06:25

    Surprised with the End!!! What a thought for a cup of tea.. Now I understood why you used to drink that much "teas" up there .. Hehe!! Honestly I wanted to ask you..😛 Anyways liked the personification. Must read twice ( vapour, aroma, fumes) waah!! what a tea ??? Or what a beloved women ??? 😉

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  41. Unknown11 January 2016 at 14:03

    Love this. Especially the end

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  42. Unknown15 February 2016 at 17:40

    Beautiful 💕🌼

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