in the deep silence
of the night
a dreaming of mine
begins
last night
i dreamt of beauty
that sight
a burning river of fire
engulfed me
and a brave madness
erupted inside me
i leapt from the bed
and went searching for beauty
high up in the white of the hills
flying across the endless skies
drifting along the misty clouds
taming the canaries and falcons
surfing the seven colors of the rainbow
i wandered into the Savannas and the Prairies.
Bathing in perfumed gardens
gyrating with lilies and the blue bells
searching among the green of the meadows
for that oasis of Eden.
Singing hymns to the wildflowers
i crossed vast deserts into faraway lands
where the winds made music
in praise of her charm.
Blasting away the calm of the forests
i hunted in the night with pumas
riding wild stallions
looking for that pearl
that hidden shrine of forever.
Jumping from the highest cliffs
diving into deepest ravines
drowning into unfathomable seas
i was a madman
in ecstasy
half-burnt
by the inferno
of this elusive beauty
suddenly
as if the dead have risen
from the grave
my phone rang
and from the invisible world
you whispered ' Hello!! '
and my search for beauty
ended :)
Yet again a masterpiece from you, Rigzin. Your writing is so much intrigued and very smoothly you take your readers to a different world. Any girl can fall for you after reading this ;)
ReplyDeleteThis is profound work. Love the way it ended. Also i like how you have used the words Savannah and prairies.
ReplyDeleteArtistically Written !
ReplyDeleteHappy ending :)
ReplyDeleteNicely conveyed1
I loved the whole dream sequence. Journey throughout the wonders of nature, an angst, a feeling of incompleteness and hurt, wanderings and waverings and then you suddenly came back to the reality with a ringtone. Beautiful work Rigzin !!
ReplyDeleteNice flow of thoughts. well worded.
ReplyDeleteWow, that's all I can say!!!!
ReplyDeleteIncredibly creative and artistic post. It was a pleasure to read your work.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely stunning piece of poetry! A pleasure to read you always Rigzin! You have a fantastic way with words : ))
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written. Reading something after a very long time...
ReplyDeleteExcellent one! At the end came a surprise- U needed 2 go nowhere- not to Prairies, not perfumed gardens, not deep seas- just a call away was ur destination! :D
ReplyDeleteSee, everyone can't do this. Turn words into jewels, poetry into magic. This is lovely Rigzin. Welcome home dear. Continue to share beauty with us.
ReplyDeleteawesome buddy... Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteLovely Read!
ReplyDelete... Wonderful dream!! Wild beauty of nature" burning river of fire" sarvanas and prairies" Oasis of Eden" high cliff" unfathomable sea" half burnt and risen from grave by the phone call.. You called these a Beauty of your dream.. A proper masculine thoughts!! WoW!!
ReplyDeleteLovely !
ReplyDeleteReading this after 2 years but it's hauntingly beautiful !
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